https://rpgpad.com/c/fwurg/characters/kial_valian

I herby submit my jedi padawan for approval

I do not know how to add IC background info yet and because I think this may influence the approval I would like to add that before she is approved.

The way to add background information is to create a page in the Setting wiki, and set it up as a person. (In this case, the page would be Padawan Kial Valian)

I also had a quick look at your character sheet:

1. For both Shii-Cho and Makashi you need to indicate which specific steps you have, e.g., most likely Shii-Cho Stance and Makashi Stance
2. Your available training points figure to be incorrect, as you get +2 free training points for each Shii-Cho techniques and stance as listed in Jedi Training Availability

I have made the corrections and have created Padawan Kial Valian in the settings. (I have added a link to the setting page in the "Notes" section of the character sheet)

Awaiting approval and possible corrections that need to be made.

Everthing looks good to me.

Kial Valian approved

(Though a little bit of introductory description of the character would greatly help the setting page ^_^)

As a note: Being a Jedi is a full-time thing. You can't just switch to and fro between being holding a military command and being a Jedi. I have no doubt that this was already clear to you, but I though I'd point it out for others that read the character background and go "Hey, I'd like my jedi to command around a fleet from the get-go"

(Also, now that your character is approved, go ahead an update your wiki page to reflect that by setting "Padawan {Name}" as the page's title, and "{Full Name}" as the page's real name—which you can get by hitting the Advanced button. That way links to your character will correctly show up with the Padawan title.

An example of this title/real name thing can be see on Master Dhahlee's page.)