He be prepared to be looked at.

At first glance I spotted the following after fixing gold, income, adding Hodgepot as a language and summoner special abilities.

1) Needs another language from Linguistics.

2) I assumed Profession is a position. That may be incorrect.

3) Manor House and Mage Tower should have values to subtract from base gold. Transfer over the values from the original site?

According to the book Stable Master is an appropriate Profession under the skill.

Otherwise, i have adjusted the suggested things.

Sanctioned.