https://rpgpad.com/c/fwurg/characters/elder_macuy_of_the_thalosii

I hereby submit my Jedi Character for approval by the storytellers.

Note that I have also created the relevant Species page for the Thalosii, and marked as a PC race in the description.

I'll build up a bit more background once I finish the general design of my faction concept and related history, though I don't suspect it will influence the approval of this character.

I think some background might be in order anyway, since "Elder" sounds like this is an older person... And the Jedi Order normally takes extra thinking and reviewing when it comes to allowing grown people into it's ranks as a padawan.

Could you elaborate a bit on the situation?

Of course, I've elaborated on a short background of my character. See his page in the setting.

On the Thalosii:

• Is "Thalosii" The singular or plural form of the species name? If it is the plural, please rename the page to the singular and add the plural as an alias.
• The description field is not really meant for "who plays what", but more for a short description that can be used in summaries and listings and such, might you be convinced to write a description that is more, well, descriptive?

On Elder Macuy of the Thalosii:

• Everything looks good.

So, in conclusion:

Thalosii approved (tentatively, as I do not want to hold up the start of the game; please look at the noted points)

Elder Macuy of the Thalosii approved (Though it might be better to simply call the Character page "Macuy" for now?)

(Also, now that your character is approved, go ahead an update your wiki page to reflect that by setting "Padawan {Name}" as the page's title, and "{Full Name}" as the page's real name—which you can get by hitting the Advanced button. That way links to your character will correctly show up with the Padawan title. Additional titles can go into the aliases field very well.

An example of this title/real name thing can be see on Master Dhahlee's page.)